I almost thought I saw a benzene molecule. Then I thought "Oh! Gravitational magnifying lens!"
As for your intended message, I think maybe it can be conveyed by this: make a big bubble that is in the middle of bursting. The left side of it is still intact, though a bit elongated, with the stars there; the right side of it is gone, with the stars shining brighter, showing that they are being "engraved" into the sky. Refer to this [link]
That's why I wrote about it. It's a particular knowledge how to convey to the audience the meaning of a picture, but I don't completely understand it. I will just try to learn how to draw better at first.